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Re: Sacred Mountain - Chapter 12 "Teach Me To Fly"
Hi again! I'm back :twisted: ... wow I just read through my review and I have a real lot of typo's! My word...I should review when I'm awake, NOT half ...
Oct 2, 2010 -
Re: E's Diary - Prologue Part 1 - To Meet...
ooki I won't worry too much about the age, but I still think you should tell us how old they are in our years, maybe by saying how many months ...
Sep 27, 2010 -
Re: E's Diary - Prologue Part 1 - To Meet...
I would say that I'm happy that I'm sleeping on the couch but my heart seems to ache. Wow isn't that a little deep for a five year old? Yuu ...
Sep 23, 2010 -
Re: E's Diary - Prologue Part 1 - To Meet...
guess wat?!? I'm back to review the rest :twisted: mwahahahahahahaaa *continues evil laugh, but to lazy to type it* because of what happen ed, with us ditching work and going ...
Sep 23, 2010 -
Re: Poetry Fight
I LIKEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE IT!!!!!!!! MORE POETRY YOU WRITE SHOULD!!!!!!!!!
Nov 16, 2008 -
Re: A Superman, Edward Cullen & the Hulk spoof thing.
You should seriously become bored again. :lol:
Nov 7, 2008 -
Re: Playing The Field - Chapter 3
Ok...firstly, this was possibly the farthest from a disappointment that I have come, and I couldn't find anything to change...it's perfect...please PM me when the next chapter is out...
Nov 7, 2008 -
Re: Beyond the Hills-Prologue
Chosenofair: They tell nothing of what's been happening to the kingdom or why they need to find the Book of the Dead, and I would think that would be something ...
Oct 29, 2008 -
Re: Beyond the Hills-Prologue
Actually...I haven't read any necromancer/Vampire/undead/horror in particular/WARHAMMER books lately. And sorry about the Thunder clapped lightning bellowed, I thought it was other way around. And aga
Oct 22, 2008 -
Re: The Book of Shadows-Prologue
Me like! Me like! More me want more!
Oct 19, 2008 -
Re: The Vampires War
The only thing I noticed is that your parents don't really seem happy, your father's mumbling etc. Why? But, I can't wait to read more..................................
Oct 19, 2008 -
Re: Until death do us part
It's sad!! :smt010 There isn't much to review. But everything has been said by Cheshire Cat... You got me hooked!...Desperately waiting for the next part
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: Prologue
Sorry, I didn't know about that rule of after a dialog tag comes a comma. :oops: And thanks for pointing out all my teypo's!! I'm busy editing...
Oct 15, 2008 -
Re: The Island Lovers
Very nice...I think it has a lot of potential. I like it. But the only mistake was already picked up by Dr. Jamie Bondage.
Oct 12, 2008 -
Re: Well this shouldn't be! Prologue
Just read the edited piece... As they open and you step in, do you see the gruesome view of a bloody red room, made of rock and blood red clay? ...
Oct 10, 2008